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A Poetic Appreciation for Demon1

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Ryszafiel

In the demesne of virtual battle, fierce and true,
Stands Demon1, a pro, with skills imbued,
Evil Geniuses' pride, a force to be reckoned,
In Valorant's arena, where legends are beckoned.

With precision aim and strategies untold,
Demon1 commands the game, a story unfolds,
In pixels and code, a hero emerges,
A master of agents, the game he surges.

Evil Geniuses' banner he proudly unfurls,
Through victories and challenges, he whirls,
A demon on the battlefield, a virtuoso's art,
Guiding his team with a valiant heart.

May his shots land true, his tactics be wise,
As Demon1 in Valorant continues to rise,
In the annals of esports, a legend he's begun,
A name that'll echo, a tale of battles won.

#2
ItsOnlyAGame
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Fix the meter, shit's all over the place.

#5
Ryszafiel
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What is your weeb ass talking about?

#6
samhatts
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The rhythm feels wrong cause of the commas, usually weird rhythm highlights something in meaning but I don't believe that's the case

#8
ItsOnlyAGame
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Meter. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metre_(poetry)
Major differentiating factor between good and shit poetry technique.
Read Poetic Meter and Poetic Form by Paul Fussell to start. You can find it online for free I'm sure.

#3
AekaMino
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semen1 haha

#4
Karmine_Org_WhispeR
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Semen1 🗿

#7
nutab1e
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🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️
🕯️ oh great demon1 🕯️
🕯️ son of EG cUm 🕯️
🕯️ pls save NA 🕯️
🕯️ from these teams 🕯️
🕯️ of bagres 🐟 🕯️
🕯️ 🕯️ 🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️🕯️

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