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lowkeygui [#13]You're welcome fan of a washed team 🤝
i dont actually like sentinels i just didnt know what else to pick
but youre washed in csgo 🤝
taehyung [#14]i dont actually like sentinels i just didnt know what else to pick
but youre washed in csgo 🤝
I'm not a fan of NIP in csgo but I agree
lowkeygui [#17]Furia LMAAO
why LMAO theres nothing wrong with that
assuming you arent like the typical brazillian csgo viewer LOL (which from our conversation i think you slight amounts of self-constrait)
andrewdamf [#19]6/10
+Better video quality (kinda blurry idk)
+Better editing
+Better music (what the fuck is this shit)
But youre pretty good, if you get better at these things you would be way better than these trash players like cjayie prod subi etc
youtube messed the quality up pretty badly i cant tell you why it looked pretty good in vegas/in my media player. but thank you!
if you dont mind would you elaborate on the "better editing" part? i really wanna improve, because its fun doing this and I wanna become better!
well, music is subjective sooooo i like it, doesnt mean you have to :)
taehyung [#18]why LMAO theres nothing wrong with that
assuming you arent like the typical brazillian csgo viewer LOL (which from our conversation i think you slight amounts of self-constrait)
because I'm tired of seeing this team being good but not enough to be champions of something
lowkeygui [#22]because I'm tired of seeing this team being good but not enough to be champions of something
fair point but theyre still pretty good and fun to watch (even for me who doesnt play csgo anymore)
freaky [#26]actual question what rank are you?
i think it was good, a bit blurry so idk if that's youtube or something but i liked it!
i am immo1 rn
it was youtube yeah idk what happened it looks good in vegas
fontea [#25]normally i nit pick a lot on like editting around the music but shit slapped i loved the bit at 1:11 if that was on purpose shit went hard
ofcourse it was hmhm thanks :)
taehyung [#21]youtube messed the quality up pretty badly i cant tell you why it looked pretty good in vegas/in my media player. but thank you!
if you dont mind would you elaborate on the "better editing" part? i really wanna improve, because its fun doing this and I wanna become better!
well, music is subjective sooooo i like it, doesnt mean you have to :)
Its kinda hard to put in words cuz i dont make videos neither do i edit but you can look up some valorant editing tutorial and see the effects, cuts, syncing etc that would make it better to watch, + ik music is subjective but if you want more views, likes, comments you will need musics the community likes. For example: you arent going to get people stay in your channel if you use some kpop song instead of some rap song. (Ik u didnt use a kpop song, just a example)
andrewdamf [#31]Its kinda hard to put in words cuz i dont make videos neither do i edit but you can look up some valorant editing tutorial and see the effects, cuts, syncing etc that would make it better to watch, + ik music is subjective but if you want more views, likes, comments you will need musics the community likes. For example: you arent going to get people stay in your channel if you use some kpop song instead of some rap song. (Ik u didnt use a kpop song, just a example)
if we were to start a discussion about music it would go back and forth to no end, since there isnt a set genre of music this community likes. i used to make similar content, just for csgo, and would post similar threads on hltv where the userbase is slightly older and significantly pickier about music in general and i deadass stayed up the whole night and didnt get a single minute of sleep just to tell this guy that not everyone likes whatever death metal shit he liked listening to. (not to say i dont like death metal, i just know that i would get headaches if i were to attempt to listen to it on a daily, shit bangs though)
well, maybe tell me a specific part where you thought it was slightly iffy? i know the ending for example is very anti-climactic in my opinion but i dont think thats what you were referring to.
taehyung [#27]i am immo1 rn
it was youtube yeah idk what happened it looks good in vegas
way more talent than any of the tiktok people, gl!
freaky [#34]way more talent than any of the tiktok people, gl!
LOL why, whats up with them?
i thought of posting some of my highlights on there to grow more on twitch
taehyung [#35]LOL why, whats up with them?
i thought of posting some of my highlights on there to grow more on twitch
you have better game sense/ situational awareness not just aim, makes the clips just that much better
freaky [#36]you have better game sense/ situational awareness not just aim, makes the clips just that much better
oh lol thanks
idk i dont play that consistently, just play for weeks at a time and then stop, maybe if i didnt i could get higher but when i post a tiktok ill send it to you so you can have some good content on your feed
taehyung [#37]oh lol thanks
idk i dont play that consistently, just play for weeks at a time and then stop, maybe if i didnt i could get higher but when i post a tiktok ill send it to you so you can have some good content on your feed
W bet
taehyung [#32]if we were to start a discussion about music it would go back and forth to no end, since there isnt a set genre of music this community likes. i used to make similar content, just for csgo, and would post similar threads on hltv where the userbase is slightly older and significantly pickier about music in general and i deadass stayed up the whole night and didnt get a single minute of sleep just to tell this guy that not everyone likes whatever death metal shit he liked listening to. (not to say i dont like death metal, i just know that i would get headaches if i were to attempt to listen to it on a daily, shit bangs though)
well, maybe tell me a specific part where you thought it was slightly iffy? i know the ending for example is very anti-climactic in my opinion but i dont think thats what you were referring to.
Sorry for the late response, too many replies and i didnt see yours, but anyway, the random black screens you put in the video are very awkward, also lacks special effects and syncing (do not put too much special effects, its gonna be worse than without effects) the ending is shitty so maybe add slowmotion in the end with a slow black screen till the end like most ytbers do (the same with the intro) make better titles, thumbnails, better pfp, banner and description, also be active with your viewers, link all your social media in case someone wants to contact you, share more settings of your valorant, put the best clips first, then the average ones and then the OP clips ones. Also dont make your clips to long, in some clips you kill the enemies and then you stop for some seconds, most people likes fast videos like me, Thats why people like seoldam and thats why hes pretty famous at yt clips (obviously hes famous because hes insane as fuck, but his videos are really good so it helps a little bit) expand your channel to like tiktok twitter Instagram discord etc.. thats all i think of, i subbed to you on yt and followed you on twitch, i hope you listen to me cuz you are a good player and has potential to become big like others, maybe even go pro? Who knows.
andrewdamf [#39]Sorry for the late response, too many replies and i didnt see yours, but anyway, the random black screens you put in the video are very awkward, also lacks special effects and syncing (do not put too much special effects, its gonna be worse than without effects) the ending is shitty so maybe add slowmotion in the end with a slow black screen till the end like most ytbers do (the same with the intro) make better titles, thumbnails, better pfp, banner and description, also be active with your viewers, link all your social media in case someone wants to contact you, share more settings of your valorant, put the best clips first, then the average ones and then the OP clips ones. Also dont make your clips to long, in some clips you kill the enemies and then you stop for some seconds, most people likes fast videos like me, Thats why people like seoldam and thats why hes pretty famous at yt clips (obviously hes famous because hes insane as fuck, but his videos are really good so it helps a little bit) expand your channel to like tiktok twitter Instagram discord etc.. thats all i think of, i subbed to you on yt and followed you on twitch, i hope you listen to me cuz you are a good player and has potential to become big like others, maybe even go pro? Who knows.
dont worry, thank you so much!! i appreciate it.
actually, to be honest with you; i wasnt looking to be doing more than the bare minimum but ever since i started streaming recently i have had this sudden surge of motivation so i hastily finished this fragmovie with some clips i made the past days (started working on this like a month ago), and thats probably why some stuff is cut awkwardly. Also the black segments were me trying to mix it to the music where when the song slows down, and comes back up, the clip does aswell.
i will definitely do probably everything you have put into your answer, i have just been pretty lazy with it, but i am quite proficient in photoshop and i am waiting for an artist i commisioned a drawing from to get back at me to finalize everything. i will create like a spreadsheet with all of that and checkmark it if i have done it, thank you for doing the work for me lmao!
i am already looking to expand to tiktok because its easy marketing, and i will send it to you!
well thanks for thinking so highly of me but i am very inconsistent in game :) at my best i might be better than seoldam and such but sometimes i should belong in plat lol
once again thank you so much!! banger response
andrewdamf [#39]Sorry for the late response, too many replies and i didnt see yours, but anyway, the random black screens you put in the video are very awkward, also lacks special effects and syncing (do not put too much special effects, its gonna be worse than without effects) the ending is shitty so maybe add slowmotion in the end with a slow black screen till the end like most ytbers do (the same with the intro) make better titles, thumbnails, better pfp, banner and description, also be active with your viewers, link all your social media in case someone wants to contact you, share more settings of your valorant, put the best clips first, then the average ones and then the OP clips ones. Also dont make your clips to long, in some clips you kill the enemies and then you stop for some seconds, most people likes fast videos like me, Thats why people like seoldam and thats why hes pretty famous at yt clips (obviously hes famous because hes insane as fuck, but his videos are really good so it helps a little bit) expand your channel to like tiktok twitter Instagram discord etc.. thats all i think of, i subbed to you on yt and followed you on twitch, i hope you listen to me cuz you are a good player and has potential to become big like others, maybe even go pro? Who knows.
i created a tiktok now: @veliyh and i am editing a clip for my first video
taehyung [#45]i created a tiktok now: @veliyh and i am editing a clip for my first video
Yo i followed you ;) i dont use tiktok as much i used to but i will try to check it out sometimes when u post, and np man, i did nothing lol. You still need to do everything else, everything that i said was more of a motivation ig, now im going to sleep. Gn (lol wtf u just posted right when im writing this)
andrewdamf [#46]Yo i followed you ;) i dont use tiktok as much i used to but i will try to check it out sometimes when u post, and np man, i did nothing lol. You still need to do everything else, everything that i said was more of a motivation ig, now im going to sleep. Gn (lol wtf u just posted right when im writing this)
oh yeah lol i finished editing it just now! i saw you follow aswell and was confused who it was LMAO
nah man, it meant a lot more than you think it did. if you didnt say anything i would have probably done nothing ill be real with you, so thank you so much!!
taehyung [#47]oh yeah lol i finished editing it just now! i saw you follow aswell and was confused who it was LMAO
nah man, it meant a lot more than you think it did. if you didnt say anything i would have probably done nothing ill be real with you, so thank you so much!!
Yeah man, ur video was really good it looked like one of those famous valorant tiktokers videos. Congrats
andrewdamf [#48]Yeah man, ur video was really good it looked like one of those famous valorant tiktokers videos. Congrats
thank you!!
yeah i looked for inspiration and thought that that was what people liked but i felt like the subtitles were a bit short and hard to read since they vanished very quickly
its trial and error at the end of the day
cal1n [#50]Op shots are Mid but when it comes to flicks, spray transfer, reaction time, and aim are INSANE!
LOL
yeah i know, just put them in because i used jett knives and they were aces but thanks
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