my game in the ranking

Hey! Could you please watch my game in the rankings?
I've been playing for a very long time, but I don't understand why I can't get out of the gold rank. (the maximum reached 3 platinum)
I would be very happy if you would advise me what I should work out in the movements, shooting and understanding of the game.
(the sound will appear in 5 minutes~)

My game:
https://youtu.be/FnmsgfpNwq0

I couldn't watch, that resolution made me cross eyed, I started to trip balls and had a seizure, sorry.

u didn´t got any impact frags, thats why...